{"id":3553,"date":"2016-02-04T16:06:07","date_gmt":"2016-02-04T21:06:07","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/juliesondradecker.com\/?p=3553"},"modified":"2020-11-10T00:49:05","modified_gmt":"2020-11-10T05:49:05","slug":"ace-of-arts-update-on-the-rest-of-chapter-6","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/juliesondradecker.com\/?p=3553","title":{"rendered":"Ace of Arts: Update on (the rest of) Chapter 6"},"content":{"rendered":"<p>Well I finished Chapter 6, and had aspirations of writing another one, but I just didn&#8217;t get around to it, because slacker.<\/p>\n<p>I mentioned a few weeks back that I started writing Chapter 6, and that I got an imaginary cityscape scene and a family interaction scene out. I went ahead and completed a school scene too, which included something big for Megan&#8217;s classmate Brady. And, as usual, my jaded protagonist is sulking about it.<\/p>\n<p>Chapter 6 is 2,031 words, bringing the book&#8217;s total to 14,161 so far.<\/p>\n<p>Here&#8217;s a thing: I&#8217;ve been using the f-word.<\/p>\n<p>It hasn&#8217;t been thrown around aggressively; it&#8217;s only popped up a few times, and I didn&#8217;t save it for powerful scenes. I just remember what high school was like, and we said some raunchy stuff. (And that didn&#8217;t really change in adulthood, but I&#8217;m saying. The f-word is common in many high schools. I remember hearing it all the time even in middle school.) This is contemporary YA and the school setting is probably pretty typical. I think it makes sense that the characters would occasionally throw out curse words, even the f-bomb. But she uses it casually, not as a shortcut to showing she&#8217;s\u00a0the &#8220;angry youth&#8221; type,\u00a0you know? Megan doesn&#8217;t talk much, so she tends to make sure the words she does say have an impact. And one of the ways she gets an impact is using strong language.<\/p>\n<p>I wonder how I&#8217;m going to handle the next few chapters. I don&#8217;t want her to suddenly become chatty, but I do need her to have some conversations with Brady. I will probably handle it with a mixture of three techniques: Having her open up unexpectedly sometimes, having her say little but add onto her comments with attached thoughts, and having Brady sort of lampshade her tight-lipped nature by bothering her to say more (which she will either refuse to do or claim she&#8217;ll tell him when she wants to). It&#8217;s a battle to get words out of Megan when you&#8217;re talking to her, but she speaks just enough that it&#8217;s not like it&#8217;s shocking if she talks (like, you know, a Silent Bob type). I don&#8217;t want it to seem like she has some kind of silence vow going on. She just doesn&#8217;t really want to talk to you. It&#8217;s not awkwardness (well, not exactly), it&#8217;s not abject rudeness, it&#8217;s not shyness; she just . . . legit doesn&#8217;t have a lot to say to you and doesn&#8217;t want your attention, so why should she?<\/p>\n<p>I&#8217;ve never written a character quite like this before and I&#8217;m enjoying the departure.<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>Well I finished Chapter 6, and had aspirations of writing another one, but I just didn&#8217;t get around to it, because slacker. I mentioned a few weeks back that I started writing Chapter 6, and that I got an imaginary cityscape scene and a family interaction scene out. 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