{"id":4210,"date":"2026-06-17T02:31:39","date_gmt":"2026-06-17T06:31:39","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/juliesondradecker.com\/?p=4210"},"modified":"2026-06-17T02:31:39","modified_gmt":"2026-06-17T06:31:39","slug":"new-completed-revamped-short-story-the-curse","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/juliesondradecker.com\/?p=4210","title":{"rendered":"New Completed (Revamped) Short Story: \u201cThe Curse\u201d"},"content":{"rendered":"<p>Another new short story has joined the pack, but it&#8217;s also . . . an old story. I decided to rewrite <a href=\"https:\/\/juliesondradecker.com\/?p=214\">&#8220;The Curse,&#8221; a short story I initially completed in 2002<\/a>. Yes, 2002!<\/p>\n<p>This is one of the earliest stories I started sending out to magazines. It collected a few rejections and I ended up retiring it because the parts that were supposed to be commentary on human nature read more like really smug exposition and I didn&#8217;t think it was good as it was. I put it on the shelf thinking maybe I&#8217;d rewrite it someday. And that day came on June 8. I started revamping the story.<\/p>\n<p>The parts of it that used to be just narration have been transmuted into a series of radio interviews, which makes them way more interesting to read and a lot less like you&#8217;re reading some author&#8217;s frame story. But that&#8217;s only half the story. The other half is a more traditionally rendered pseudo-fantasy quest, and I kept a lot of the content from the original story.<\/p>\n<p>And I don&#8217;t know that that&#8217;s a good thing. I&#8217;ve reread those bits and tweaked them a lot but I may need to actually fully rebuild those too before I feel comfortable with the story.<\/p>\n<p>The thing I&#8217;m most worried about, though, is how prone it is to looking like it&#8217;s trying to be some top-down insightful nothingburger commentary on humanity. It might come across as fake deep and no one wants that.<\/p>\n<p>But I&#8217;m happy it&#8217;s done&#8211;I wrapped it up in five writing sessions and it&#8217;s sitting at about 10,000 words. I&#8217;d like to cut it down of course but the transcript format makes that tougher. Oh well. This story&#8217;s central idea is one I did care about and I want to figure out how to tell it so people actually want to read it.<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>Another new short story has joined the pack, but it&#8217;s also . . . an old story. I decided to rewrite &#8220;The Curse,&#8221; a short story I initially completed in 2002. Yes, 2002! This is one of the earliest stories I started sending out to magazines. It collected a few rejections and I ended up [&hellip;]<\/p>\n","protected":false},"author":1,"featured_media":0,"comment_status":"open","ping_status":"open","sticky":false,"template":"","format":"standard","meta":{"footnotes":""},"categories":[36,5,18],"tags":[],"class_list":["post-4210","post","type-post","status-publish","format-standard","hentry","category-blog","category-news","category-short-stories"],"_links":{"self":[{"href":"https:\/\/juliesondradecker.com\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/posts\/4210","targetHints":{"allow":["GET"]}}],"collection":[{"href":"https:\/\/juliesondradecker.com\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/posts"}],"about":[{"href":"https:\/\/juliesondradecker.com\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/types\/post"}],"author":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/juliesondradecker.com\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/users\/1"}],"replies":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/juliesondradecker.com\/index.php?rest_route=%2Fwp%2Fv2%2Fcomments&post=4210"}],"version-history":[{"count":1,"href":"https:\/\/juliesondradecker.com\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/posts\/4210\/revisions"}],"predecessor-version":[{"id":4211,"href":"https:\/\/juliesondradecker.com\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/posts\/4210\/revisions\/4211"}],"wp:attachment":[{"href":"https:\/\/juliesondradecker.com\/index.php?rest_route=%2Fwp%2Fv2%2Fmedia&parent=4210"}],"wp:term":[{"taxonomy":"category","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/juliesondradecker.com\/index.php?rest_route=%2Fwp%2Fv2%2Fcategories&post=4210"},{"taxonomy":"post_tag","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/juliesondradecker.com\/index.php?rest_route=%2Fwp%2Fv2%2Ftags&post=4210"}],"curies":[{"name":"wp","href":"https:\/\/api.w.org\/{rel}","templated":true}]}}